Distance

Was the distance because of her heavy grey clouds that surrounded her or my own inability to clear up the storm and help her? I understand now why I see her grey as beautiful instead of melancholy; it no longer blocks her color and grace but instead frames her and emphasizes what she was fighting for the entire time. As she moves through their life I wondered how she is so lovely; now I understand that the trauma she suffered has caused her to grow in a way that could make God himself jealous.

She is the epitome of a masterpiece because she is not just a surface work of art. She has layers that reveal her complexity and cause a sense of curiosity in me that I cannot quell. Since the moment I saw her I was drawn to the mystery she enshrouded herself with. Everything about her is beautiful and I feel more complete just for knowing of her.

Reviews

[Karen Arizona]

Hi Maria, Whoever you wrote 'Distance' for should feel truly complimented. The words you write are beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Maria Elise]

Thanks so much!

[micky]

This beautiful...well done :)