Romancing

Romancing

A Poem by justa335
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playing with nouns (image is of Manila Bay c/o http://xcentrikfads.blogspot.com/)

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Whisper me,

Breeze-kissed murmurs of slumber awakening

Like dawn, shy but beguiling, rising reluctant

To the gentle insistence of dew on grass, silvered,

As grey lightens to morning.


Captive me,

Gentle the restless soul with passion reined

Refuge found at your measured heartbeats

No longer alone, solitude cast away, like the shadow games

Of youthful days.


Passion me,

Love and want numbing all, only senses in tune

To the wordless song of desire endlessly played,

The eternal flow and ebb of fervor’s sea, beckoning,

Till the harbor is reached and then


Release me.

© 2015 justa335


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A very descripive take describing these nouns/some of them verbs :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justa335

9 Years Ago

Thank you in turn, moonskittles :-)
Lovely! It would be nice to see a larger image of Manila Bay; it's easy to add it to your writing (it actually works on this site!). Did you mean to use "Captive" rather than "Capture"?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justa335

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Roland. Captive is correct, but my description is all wrong, it should be 'playing with n.. read more
Roland Petrov

9 Years Ago

OK, I get it now. You are indeed being playful with nouns. An interesting idea, and in your hands it.. read more

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Added on July 10, 2015
Last Updated on August 31, 2015
Tags: Romance, Love, Desire

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justa335
justa335

Paranaque City, Metro Manila, Philippines



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