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A Poem by Marian Elizabeth

Sitting at a chill cafe,

Under the spell of good jazz,

I felt a bohemian thread

Bind the vessels in my heart

And I thought of trinkets, cheap,

Interlaced with shells and beads

And feathers of teal tones

That gently masked blue eye charms.

I craved to adorn my ankles, yes,

For I thought the Moon would do too

If she had slender legs and coins

To buy dazzling talismans.

In my mind she strongly loved it,

Being silver and embellished,

From crest to crest her lure enhanced,

I almost stood up and left

But the tune that had been playing

As quick as it started, died. 

© 2016 Marian Elizabeth


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I was reminded not too long ago of my introduction to Bohemianess.. and jazz.. and espresso.. and spoken poetry.. now you have brought it back a second d time.. dark and rich and full bodied.. a lifetime ago.. it's probably a good thing there is no open air market place right now.. me and the moon might just wander off..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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You have a way with words, something that reads effortless, creative and good mingled with great images, kind of dreamy, almost "other worldly" yet perfectly fitted into life as we know it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Marian Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I think this is the most explicit review I have received so far, and I appreciate it. Yes.. read more
V

7 Years Ago

It is and it was a lovely read. You're welcome.
heh i love passions like this that are lit by music and light (or lack of it) and then head back to air like bits of the big swell hitting a rock.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Marian Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

Yes indeed... some emotions are triggered by something and they die when that something dies...
The Twin Arenas

7 Years Ago

good while it lasts, though. fleeting things too often have a poor reputation.

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Added on July 17, 2016
Last Updated on July 17, 2016
Tags: Bohemianism, Art, Sadness, Sun, Moon

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Marian Elizabeth
Marian Elizabeth

Miami, FL



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I am a literature teacher and a writer. I write both prose and poetry, and I work with the themes of anorexia, feminism, nature, the vulnerability of beauty, depression, magic, melancholy, and Bohemia.. more..

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