After Breakup

A lot of pain in the ribs

I have forgotten his words

It has come to understand the foolish
The pains have taught all

I saw happiness in my tears
He found happiness in his smile

Reviews

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Well I've no experience bout break ups so can only give practical words....maybe it's a lesson for us as the stain of pain stays longer in the heart than happiness....
Mmm...Ribs are very pain today - I do have grammatical problems but I guess it could be paining or has very!
But it's all upon you,...here am just a minor reviewer😊
Happy writing!

[Sheikh Shadi Marjan]

thank you friend

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You're heartedly welcome😊

[Sheikh Shadi Marjan]

Please never mind. I am very weak in English.

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Even I was!
But you'll surely prosper while writing😊

[Sheikh Shadi Marjan]

thank you for you valuable suggestion

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You're already heartedly welcome!😊