Walking a mile

There is a mixture of many things here. Hope one will bifurcate, differentiate & understand them all each.

Walking a mile....!

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

 

Returning to a home...

Which existed never.

Loving a mother...

Who never loved in return.

Love so profound & chaste...

Seen only in dreams & fairy tale.

 

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

 

Lost in the crowd...

Yet very lonely.

Solace arrived gracefully...

Mind haunted with thoughts.

It’s raining out there ...

Regret not getting wet.

 

 

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

 

Looked into the mirror...

To see the broken reflection of self.

These barren lands...

Haven’t seen flood for long.

Smiling & laughing now...

Over the tears & pain survived ever.

 

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

Mary Christabel George.......!

 

Author's Note

Some find it hopeless yet i find some hope in it.
Reviews plz...

Reviews

[Deuces]

Wow, Mary. Powerful and profound piece. I think anyone who has at one point or another felt like they were taken for granted in some way or another or dealt a bad hand can relate. I enjoyed this and also enjoyed the chorus and italics every two paragraph. Send me some requests - would love to read more.

[Mary Christabel George]

Thanks for enjoying the read. I am glad to know that you can relate to this poem. Yes will send you some read requests. You can see some of my work...:)

[char]

That's nice. Love the repitition.

[Mary Christabel George]

Thank you Anna....:)

[Emily Feret]

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

I find hope as well!

[Mary Christabel George]

Thank you so much Emily....:)

[Silhouette]

I find a ray of hope in this piece. I also think it's written like a song. Beautiful job =)

[Mary Christabel George]

Ya kinda song.....!
Thanks for the read & finding it full of hope.

[Silhouette]

You are so welcome, and thank you, too. =)

[DIVYA]

Living Life, however tough comes easy to those with the gift of gratitude. For such people know how to spot the rainbows behind grim grey clouds.

"Looked into the mirror...
To see the broken reflection of self." - You say a lot here while doing some terrific poetry too. We are broken by our very own who turn us away when we seek from them love.

However, only we can restore ourselves and pick up the pieces. Remember, we are priceless and we deserve the best.

Excellent presentation Mary! Write on!

[Mary Christabel George]

I agree to every word of yours here.
Absolutely.....
We need to pick up the pieces & restore ourselves.
Thank you Divya....:)

[KeelyJane]

I see so much hope in this actually. Beautiful pen. :)

[Mary Christabel George]

Thank you Keely...:)

[KeeD]

You'll go very far in life, I can confidently say that. You're hope gives me hope and to share that with someone through words is precious. Thank you for this, great job.

[Mary Christabel George]

Keegan, Thanks for those kind words.
It is motivation for me.
I will try to up to your words.

[Will]

I read this and hear it as a song. The repetition of that one stanza is very eerie, and lends itself to powerful emotions. Very nice. My favorite part:


Looked into the mirror...
To see the broken reflection of self.

Nice write :)

[Mary Christabel George]

Ya... Even i do like those lines....
Thanks for liking it Will & for your feedback.
:)

[Will]

Anytime :)

[Mary Christabel George]

:)

[Gracie.M]

I like this poem, I related to the part where you were talking about feeling lonely in a crowd, and when you regret not getting wet in the rain. :)

[Mary Christabel George]

Thank you for liking the poem & relating to it.
I can understand Gracie..:-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Kinda rolled along like a country western ballad. Nice

[Mary Christabel George]

Thanks for the read.