Madness

Review given to Selene's Red Beryl Vows

Shall I be your end,

 a thought that runs its course?

 or shall I make us the beginning?

 Will you be my victim,

 my cherished prize.

Or will you enter into a world

created by obsession.

 A world of pure madness....

or madness that has created this world.

 Will you lust for me,

 desire me.

Hurt me.

Shall I be your Angel,

with a tender touch and loving caress...

will you accept me?

 Allow me to travel down

the unseen path of purity.

 Will you lust for the desire?

 Obsess over the possibilities.

Will you find us a w***e....

to cherish.

Dress her like a doll.

Lust for her.

Shall I show her the attention you want?

Tease you.

Please her

 while you watch me

 with your gaze

 fixated upon the purity

 of madness.

 Will you stare

 into her eyes

 as the cord

 tightens.

Shall I stare into yours

 as the thrill

 quickens your heart,

 arouses you.

 Will you desire me,

 please me.

Taunt me

for having her.

Will you leave

 a rose

 on her chest...

an offering of love....

remorse....

madness...

Author's Note

Madness is contagious.

Inspired by Selene's ~Red Beryl Vows~

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

oh wow, oh wow, Dearest, love it,
I like it because it is madness and twisted lust
the relish of love, but affection to a "w***e"
where the purity lingers in a doll, a "w***e"
fun to read, great write! p.s. join my group, Erotica, will invite, ----Maynard

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in. I will check it out.

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague December]

most welcome, Dearest, :P

[David W Moore III]

As always, you manage to excite while you disturb. Never a dull read. Captivating (no pun... Oh hell, pun was intended!) and lyrical. There's always a disconnect in your works. They are beautiful, but you don't want to like them since they are always a bit (and sometimes more than a bit) depraved. Great job of taking me away from the doldrums (Not Red Beryl Vows, as that was anything but dull)

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

honestly, madness is contagious. I liked what you've written here. The flow is just pure awesome. I'm sorry I talk like that.
Anyway, this was darker than dark and it did what it was supposed to do: portray madness. Great job! Keep writing!
-Yin

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

how beautifully in darkly bent you've bounced your serrated steel from my wounded canvas~ drawing a brand new bruise across the landscape of the darker little things that scurry through our hindbrains~