Kultryu/Murder

Look into my eyes

Your Punishment for the lies 

 Decapitation

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Matthew,

obviously, in this case of levity's brevity, lies are dealt with in such a way to separate one's head from one's lie supporting shoulders ... Assuredly, as such from the same personage, shall likely never happen again ... Enjoyable and pleasantly Dark ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in.

Matthew

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very brutal and set forth in a senyru with some impact!

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in

Matthew

[MCS]

Ouch!
Short and to the point
Well done

[jdr / Jennifer]

Very nicely done- A perfect & quite unique haiku. Excellent write- with some pretty deep & dark emotion easily fitting into the format. Perfectly penned!!! Thank you for sharing your work.

[Mockingbird]

that is so awesome.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

cutting off the part that spewed untruths~ clever

[Kelly M.]

wow its so short but it leaves your head spinning. This could mean a lot of things. I like that you left us hanging her thinking I don't understand!?!? Very dark and chilling. I like it.

[Bunnycorn]

Sounds sort of like something that guy from Mortal Combat would say. (Sorry, had to put that there) I wish that it was longer...but I think that's the point of this style of writing

[Amy Bumpas]

Oh, that is harsh...lol

guess he lost his head.