Fire and Ice

This is not an actually poem kinda thing its a prophecy kinda thing I wrote for one of my book a year ago

Hidden powers deep inside
In two females the power does hide
Coming out when emotions are strong
The power hides but not for long

Coming from darkness, part vampire
One girl has control of fire
Part witch and paying the price
The other control water and ice

These girls control the worlds fate
In their heart love or hate
The world is in their hand
First choice is the choice that stands

Even more power will come to them,
but all could be destroyed just by him
He can make the world end.
If he gains their trust once again.

Author's Note

This is not an actually poem kinda thing its a prophecy kinda thing I wrote for one of my book a year ago

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

choice choice fire ice or him ,ah you have already given in.

[The Empty Hour Glass]

I was expecting a cheap Robert Frost rip off, but I was surely surprised. Though, I must say in it's I picture a cartoon on Nicktoons... Not to insult or deter, it's a good poem. That is just what it brought to mind.

[J.L.]

I love the writing in this. plus it sounds like a real prophecy, you know, gives away excaly what you need to be looking for, but nothing to obvious

[afra]

good one ...i enjoyed reading it ...keep it up

[bursting colors]

or coming from an old mummy oracle

[bursting colors]

i can see this on an old wrinkly scroll

[SeventhSin]

Another one! :) I kinda like these :)

[Owlgirl]

Nice flow amd rhyme scheme, awesome prophecy!

[RachelReaper]

Cool prophecy, it had a nice rhythm to it

[nigrum homonculus]

pretty decent. flowed well and you could feel the responsibility set on the two girls.