Women

Women

A Poem by Mazie Tackett

No woman needs a man's love to be complete.
There is no such thing as love at first sight.
They only think they're in love when they meet.
Some do feel they have to have a man in their life.

They are wrong.
We are stronger without men than ever.
It won't be long
Before we girls unite together.

And crush all things male.
They think they can push us around,
But when all else fails, they will bail,
But us we will stand firm and hold our ground.

We will stick together.
We will be strong.
If they can't now, they won't ever,
But they will be wrong.

© 2013 Mazie Tackett


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it's called the "Daddy syndrome" when a female feels she needs a man to be happy in life. Yeah I know plenty that fell victim to this...but with time and maturity..they will hopefully become wiser..discover their self worth...and find strength to have their own identity separte from that of another.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Us guys need a good thrashing, and your dad is right all guys are bad, love is just a chemical reaction in times weaving river but god what a river !

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow, very powerful and strong. i feel like you probably dont 100% agree with all of this anymore, it sounds like you wrote this in anger. anyway nice work, it's beautifully written and full of emotions :P
-Mariah

Posted 7 Years Ago


I am very protective of my family and some of them feel they're incomplete without being in a relationship so get what you're saying but the hatred towards "men" in general... Why do all the jerks out there ruin in for the nice guy!

Love at first site can only be looks
Love is deeper than sight

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mazie Tackett

7 Years Ago

ya lol they were kinda strange :)
That_Guy

7 Years Ago

just a little ;)
Mazie Tackett

7 Years Ago

lol
You are right a women don't need a man
A man need a women
There is love at first sight
When God made you it was love at first sight
Yes you can be strong b your self, but two heads together are better then one
Nice poem some things i just didn't agree with




Posted 7 Years Ago


Mazie Tackett

7 Years Ago

i do believe in love but i just dont believe in love at first sight u have to spend time with a pers.. read more
I guess the writer has encountered maltreatment or torture from any male in her life which encouraged to write the lovely poem.Eve teasing or sexual harassment is
a common problem across the world.The girls who do not like unnecessary male domination and want to avoid being toys in the hands of playful boys may suffer from mental agony.Some of such girls may be vocal and protest in some manner.
Others may burn themselves in their heart in bear the pain silently throughout their life.However,by expressing their feeling through poems,songs and stories may be a good way to release the anger which may also give them some comfort.
I congratulate Maize for writing such a nice rhymed poem that has entertained me by its beauty and content.


Posted 7 Years Ago


zainul

7 Years Ago

Was it like that?
Then you had no scope to verify your daddy's comment.
But,I wonder ho.. read more
Mazie Tackett

7 Years Ago

huh
zainul

7 Years Ago

ok,talented poetess.
Hmm.. feminism. There's anger in there. I'm an out and proud lesbian but I don't hate men. They still have their part in the universe. Of course I can live without them but I wouldn't be here without a man. I mean it will still depend on the situation. I think the audience tend to generalize the poem. And I also think your poem was rooted from your personal experience but then I could be wrong.

But for me, this is a work of passion. Nice job!



Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this poem! Great work ;D

Posted 7 Years Ago


I disagree with the 2nd line.
I like feminism, but it sounds too close to lesbianism.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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