Shadows

My scribble

I've walked on this path forever 

Searching for your shadow between the trees 

Hearing your laughter coming at me 

Still , no real you .

You've left for awhile 

My life now is silence 

Neither songs nor tears .

I'll keep looking on this grey path 

For the love I've once hath .

Reviews

[Jamestown]

You have such a smooth style, it seems like it comes 2nd nature. Yes, that love once
had now not, so many go through this pain in life. Thanks for writing such a nice
piece, b-blessed!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Jamestown :-) ... I appreciate you read it . Have a good day .

[Christopher Casper]

This perfectly captures one of the situations that the vast majority of people have in common. Time passes but the imprint is left just the same.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Christopher Casper :-) ... sometimes those imprints that bind us for life :-)

[Yash]

My review is a bit different. I liked your poem but i think it's sad (personal opinion).

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you for the review all the same :-) ...yes it's a sad poem

[Leviathus Fortes]

A lost love and a heart wanting.

That always seems to be our backstory.

[Mary Bradley]

I think so :-) ... love and yearning speak louder in poems

[A. Amos]

I have written on same title and I enjoy reading your poem coming from the deepest part of your heart!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you A. Amos . I appreciate your review . I'll check yours very soon

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Lavender Soya]

Nice array of melancholic sentiments. :-)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Lavender Soya ... lost love does reign supreme sometimes :-)
I appreciate your reviews !

[Lavender Soya]

I couldn't agree more. Such experience makes people even more poetic. It's always a pleasure. Keep writing! :-)