My One, my Only, my Love, my Cody

this is something that literally spoke to me one and this is a little different than most of my work but i think you will like it

My One....
you mean my crazed UNC lover,
you mean my picky eater,
you mean my other half of...
my mind, body, heart,and soul,
My Only!

My Love.........
the one whose favorite color is light blue,
the one who has eyes that sparkle with the stars,
the whose sun is always dropped,
the one who sees the good inside of me
My One, My Cody

Author's Note

i know some of this is probably done wrong and what not but please don't comment on grammar or spelling thanks:)

Reviews

[David E Navarro]

You cannot ignore grammar and spelling and totally missed words like in this one. If you want respect and credibility as a poet, take the time to do it right.

You see, you absolutely lose credibility and readers if you have no respect for the language, which is the medium of the art. You write some pretty decent poetry from the heart, why not demonstrate a care and respect for the language and the presentation of your work?

You should rather solicit corrections and then edit the poem accordingly.

I have mentored hundreds of poets over the years and helped many to get published. I run active forums where you can learn how to write better poetry in a non-threatening environment where we offer kind and honest encouraging instruction.

You're worth it, and your poetry is worth it, don't sell yourself short. You deserve to present the best and to be respected for your work.

Consider it, write to me if you want to know about my forums. Cheers.

[Antoñyo]

I think this captures well that most special moment.

Thanks for sharing

[EMF]

Wonderful poem, bu...I have to disagree with you. There's nothing wrong with it at all. Great job and great emotion. Lucky Guy.

[Dove]

This is a sweet poem. It showed that you would accept anyone for who they are. Fantastic poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Gave positive and negative. And ended with love and appreciation. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Forest Green]

Sweet romance...accepting one for what they are.

Nicely written...1

[YouoweYoupay]

I agree with sweet. Writing about what is currently running in our veins is artistic and sincere. Keep it up.

[stars are far]

this was so swweeet well done :)

[SilentDreamer]

Sweet, very dramatic! Nicely done.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very sweet write..great :)