THE PAIN OF LOVE

Well i wrote this poem in like 5 mins.! yeah,i was throwing around everything around me cause it hurt that bad thinking about the one i loved ! so yeah ! just put my thoughts into words ! :)

Moving around with a smile in my face,

telling myself that everything is over. 

trying to fool my heart every single day 

swallowed by lonliness,crushing me deep 

down to the very depth of never ending pain 

sudden pangs of pain tearing me apart, 

slowly killing the soul inside me. 

even now i console myself holding my pillow,

thinking to myself that its not worth the wait.

i tell to myself daily that i dont love you 

but your thoughts haunt me more than anything. 

i hated the very word love before i met you 

but now i just cant seem to live without it. 

i just wish i could take my own life, 

the pain is so intolerable like how 

you would feel when you get crushed under a huge rock 

like a small ant which is on its path to 

find some food for its small,yet happy family

as much as i try to forget you,but god! you 

pretty woman,you are the only thing in my mind.

i tried so hard to move on,thinking it would be so easy,

but i am writing this poem for the very fact that 

your thoughts are killing me each and every single second

i don't care if you hate me or if you do actually like me

but all i want to let you know is that,

i will breath my last when i see your face.

sameer :'( 

Author's Note

hey people..i have been writing poems for a long time.! well to be honest,i am confused to where to keep the punctuation marks.! so i welcome all reviews,be it good or bad..! i will be really happy for the feedback ! cheerios ! :)

Reviews

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