Six Word Story (2)

Six Word Story (2)

A Story by Loner

Exiting her bedroom, his daughter wept.

© 2008 Loner


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Never a happy story with you is it? I don't understand how some sick men could do that to their own daughters. How do you rape your own flesh and blood. It's revolting. The story however is exactly perfect, it's heart wringing and simple. Exactly what a 6 word story should be. I wonder what Mr. Hemingway would say.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I see! He told her a scary story!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never a happy story with you is it? I don't understand how some sick men could do that to their own daughters. How do you rape your own flesh and blood. It's revolting. The story however is exactly perfect, it's heart wringing and simple. Exactly what a 6 word story should be. I wonder what Mr. Hemingway would say.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on May 21, 2008

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Loner
Loner

Where the tumbleweeds blow along a vapid and dusty canvas, CA



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