They.

I lay down on the ground,

Staring up at the stars,

No feeling can intervene,

With loss and lonliness.

 

Im scared,

terrified I may say,

They tried to conquer my fears,

But nothing is to work.

 

Im holding on,

Trying to grasp life by hold,

It all seems to fast for me,

Please help.

 

My soul has been shattered,

By the events that have occured,

So for now,

Expect me to be unheard.

 

Its starting to rain,

The sky is weeping for me,

I still stare up,

Trying to figure out,

Why me?

Reviews

[Jen Marks]

Hmm, it really makes you wonder what happened.
Is there a story to go along with this?
If not, there should be! :)

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♥Jen Marks

[Dillon Cotter]

i like this poem, very realisting and gives off good imagery.

-will