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In my casket I lay surrounded,

My silent screams escape me,

Let go of me, don't bury me,

Say amazing grace,

God bless you and walk away,

Forget me, don't be sad,

Save your tears,

I don't need them any longer,

I'll see you when I see you,

So don't be sad be happy,

I'm out of your hair,

See? look at me now!

I can fly!

Just like I always wanted to.

Like I always dreamed,

Soaring high above the hilltops into Paradise.

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

My darling Dove , this is a breathless piece. You have writing through such a pure Soul that you've have blown my mind.
I am so proud of you, and your spirit to Fly.
And you will!
You will Soar heights you never thought possible!
You watch! Much Love Beautiful Girl!

[meganelizabeth23]

thanks mom

[Priscilla Sayers]

Yes BabyGirl!
You just let it all go and write Lovely Dove

[meganelizabeth23]

ok:) I will

[Fernando Dardón]

well this is a very sad but precious perspective of death. I could imagine a couple, separated by death. Damn I almost cry.
The best part of it, it that the dead lover wants the other to be happy! :')

PERFECT!

[meganelizabeth23]

Thanks for reading it i enjoy your evaluations of my writing

[Fernando Dardón]

You're welcome :)

[Scott Metro]

Kinda sad...but maybe a sweet release...
Cut short.
An unusual look at death.
Enjoyed it.

Scott


Scott

[meganelizabeth23]

thanks its how I view death

[Scott Metro]

You're welcome...think about something else...LOL
Scott

[meganelizabeth23]

ok lol will do

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.........

[Shaquana Adams]

I really liked this. I think the fact that people are always saddened by death particularly peaked my interest. I enjoyed reading this different view of something usually categorized as sad. Thanks for sharing!

[meganelizabeth23]

thanks a ton I was trying to do that so thanks for noticing

[Shaquana Adams]

You're welcome :)