Gone forever

This is about an Ex-boyfriend who had hurt me so badly that i had the need to write this

 The dark and agonizing pain that travels through me...

is ruffle humiliating.

I want to die

I want to stop suffering.

Grief and guilt winds inside me,

Never to leave.

I justice to be

Served to him!

Send hin away

For years at a time

I want him to hurt.

Hurt the way I do.

Every time I open

My slumbering eyes

In the morning...

I want to Die

I want to stop suffering...

Reviews

[RainDancer1997]

This was really emotional. Sometimes I feel like that. Its good when your readers can connect with your work. Good job:)

[Graveyardfuck]

The reason I clicked on this poem was because of the mere fact that "Gone Forever" is a song by Three Days Grace that I have had stuck in my head for quite a while.
But then I read your poem and now I feel like I can relate to this piece...

[Angelove]

Thank you :))

[Riding the Rainbow]

It really felt like I was the one writing it.
It touched my heart.
Thank you.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

this has so much emotion in it and it has such meaning. Whoever this guy was im sure hes not worth your tears and i hope in time when your heart heals. You will find someone worthy of you :)

[Angelove]

thanks dear

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[unsavable_soul]

striking write,
Strong conveyance to the emotional torments suffered. A couple typos, but nothing that makes it hard to read. To some degree we all share a pain of this magnitude. Something that is not so simple to let go, we didn't ask for it, can't give it away, and half the time we can't even leave it somewhere long enough to think. I hope the suffering wanes for you.
Chris
100/100

[BL]

Raw and emotional write that expresses your feelings very honestly, I am sorry you got hurt so badly,

[Chula]

I think that this writing is extremely interesting :)

[Michael Soul]

my soul is pulled on by star's living and dead ones know they sit beside
echoing words peaking come closure striping parts torn to the fall
parts of my mind
drip from the selling
pouring down the walls.
as multiple colored rain drops,
lyrical vapor roller coaster
fluids out through the flour,
given for tomorrow.
through waves of history
flows within wires and air waves
form past yesterday's
relaying parts of my mind
re shaping refreshing reforming,
linked in nature and bounded with creation.

[Angeldust-magic]

good job (: i respect it. it reminds me of my own work, i like the framing and the word play

[B-poet]

This is a very intense and bitterly passionate poem. You can just feel the energy from page as you're reading it. Great work here. You've conveyed your message very well throughout this entire write. :)