Stronger

If you thought I was small and weak I'll show you what small and weak is.

If you thought you could walk all over me you where wrong.

Sure you hit me and kidnapped me but I was the stronger one.

And when your time comes you'll know what pain is when you die alone

Being the stronger one maybe hard but I won't let you trample over me!

Reviews

[axel]

good writing, inspiration , yet a bit stubborn,nice

[Keith]

This is intense and powerful.
I am in wonder whenever an author can put forth such powerful prose with so few words.
I'm impressed.

[Cassie Fraga]

very strong piece indeed!! a write written from within always speaks so loud... and this one is SCREAMING with expression! good job!!

[Monica]

I love this! It is strong with emotion and pride for oneself. From the first line to the last you wrote a perfect piece :) Standing up for yourself in the most difficult of times...may very well be the most rewarding. Well done!