I won't give up

I wonder when you will return

do you miss me

did you forget me

I'll wait here as long as it takes

I hope you enjoy it

while it lasts

If i had the money to join you

i would have

if you really want me there

i won't know

Did you go to leave me alone

do you want me to leave you alone

This is my message for you

I won't give up on us

even though your miles away

you are my friend

I won't give up on us

I will wait for you

I don't know if you miss me

but hell I miss you

 

Reviews

[Zahra]

Sad but hopeful. An emotional and sweet poem. Nice.

[Adri Moolman]

thank u

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautifully mournful. The waiting is sometimes the hardest place to be. The last two lines...I've felt that recently, so I can relate to this one quite well.

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[Lily Finch]

sad but so beautiful :)

[Adri Moolman]

thank u

[smilempsn]

'I don't know if you miss me
but hell I miss you '

may be that would look perfect in

'I don't know if you will miss me
but hell I'll miss you'


We never know the story from other end.... But in our heart, we are so sure of missing that special ...dear...person in our life..!!

[Adri Moolman]

thanks for the review

[Simon Welsh]

Awhhhh this is such a sadness. That last line is a perfect end.

[Adri Moolman]

thank u

[Gaurav Walia]

The title reminded me of a song by Jason Mraz and when I was reading this piece that music was stuck to my head then I realized this one could have been a pefect part of the song ... well done... :D

[Adri Moolman]

i thought of that song while writing

[Gaurav Walia]

No wonder... ;) See it came out to be an amazing one... I'm Impressed ..

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[AlexValkyrie]

That was nothing short of beautiful, and reached me on a personal level regarding a close friend of mine. Your writing is inspiring and well written as always. Keep up the good work.

[Adri Moolman]

thanks a lot i'm glad you enjoy it

[quinfinn]

distance is relative...closeness is in the heart. it seems this person is not far away at all, in your heart of hearts. there is an old saying from the hippie days of the 70's..."if you love something set it free, if it comes back to you it is yours....if it doesn't, it never was" i think that pretty well says it all. this is a tender and touching write, well done!

[Adri Moolman]

thank u

[quinfinn]

always welcome, Adri

[Ency Bearis]

an alternative way of saying you miss that person so much, good one

[Adri Moolman]

thank u