you don't know

another stalker kind of poem

dark eyes

you don't know

they watch you come

and they watch you go

always there

you are never alone

sometimes you will feel the cold

your blanket won't help

but you don't know

nightmares slowly start to haunt your sleep

you feel claustrophobic

you don't know why

red lips so close each night

you don't see them

you don't know

evil laughs

not imaginary

but you don't know

white pale face

vacant eyes

it was too late

you should have known 

Reviews

[Rahul]

Scary !
nice write once again. deep words, you can write one story on it, it'd be nice...wonderful poem.100/100

[Adri Moolman]

wow again thanks a lot....

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel of mystery in the poem. To be watched can be a scary feeling. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Ency Bearis]

eerie, witty poem can give goosebumps to readers

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Darkness oozes from each line of this piece. Gave me the chills and made me happy that I read this in the morning and not just before bed. There is so much "evil" in the world, manifesting through government, policy, and people themselves...there is so much to be afraid of, and yet we must not slink in the shadows. Well done, yet again.

[Adri Moolman]

thanks a lot

[Astro]

Creepy. This is definitely more of a female perspective but I can still imagine the fear and anxiety. I would have liked a bit of metaphor to go with the events but still well done, right up to the chilling ending line.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[smilempsn]

Eeee..... Why do I read n review your such poems at nite only..!!
They haunt me in my sleep :P
That means they are that good ;)

[Adri Moolman]

hahaha thanks u

[smilempsn]

:P surely you love to scare people at night...using your poems.. rite :P

[Adri Moolman]

pretty much

[Archangel Gabriel]

It has the chill of the unknown fear to it Adri but it felt more like the feelings of someone paranoid because it seems to all be in the protagonists mind rather than a stalker.

[Adri Moolman]

it is more about mind than real stalker

[Baby Ricochet]

Creepy. The short lines work well here. Outstanding work.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you