A change :)

A change :)

A Poem by BeautifulMelody
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Everyone Can change everything..

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It’s hard to face the fact that there are cruel people in the world.

I’m just a girl who’s likes fun and likes to twirl.

But hey, that’s how it is…

That’s how it makes us…different but, sometimes I wish

There was peace in the world, it wouldn’t hurt.

I believe that all that it take is support.

Can’t you imagine a world without wars?

All we have to say is no more!

Though it’s not as easy as it sounds.

We can still TRY, you just can’t let it get you down.

 

Imagine a world without fights, bullies, and pain.

What if one day all that’s bad goes away.

There could be better days.

We just have to find the way.

Make a stand.

Just take a chance.

Everyone CAN change everything.

 

(Sorry if its short. Thank you for reading!)

© 2011 BeautifulMelody


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BeautifulMelody
Any advice would be great :D

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remember to re-read for grammar proble,ms there but no problem you can edit your work, and and we all want peace, the pen is mightier then the sword and that's what you did.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hello! My name is Melanie hehehe :) Im 10 years old! but, don't tell the writerscafe person..shhh... I dont want to be kicked out of here x) Just to be sure, I am VERY "mature" .......sometimes. H.. more..

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