Truth

Truth

A Poem by melz1108
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My struggles deep with-in

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Deep inside the pain is a dark cloud

The desire to cut away is so strong

I feel beautiful, yet I look in the mirror

There the truth is shown

 

A bright future is promised

For a bright and pretty girl

But my vision is blocked

By that dam dark cloud.

 

Corruption surrounds me

It sucked me in, no one to trust

So I run (once again) I run far away

Trying to ditch that black cloud

 

I think I lost it...

No pain in sight, hope is back

I turn and look back

There it is hovering, just waiting.

 

So now it’s back, NO CHANGE!

No chance to run, so I am stuck, again

Wait let me try one last time

Forget where is my friend??(?)

© 2010 melz1108


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the dark cloud of truth that lies deep inside. you can pretend that the truth is whatever you want it to be but it's only pretending. the black cloud will always be there; following you; stalking you! bloody brilliant write! i like it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love to write about my emotions though I am not skilled at it, yet. Our moments try to define us they sneak into our souls and take over; once they succeed, they take over our lives. Our struggl.. more..

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