Ascend

Your lips taste like candy, sweet to the touch

Too sweet for me to bear; I say it’s far too much

Your kisses make my mouth water; though I also feel a bit parched

Craving you so bad, my mouth dry, back arched

Your hands slide down my body, all I see is your twisted smile

And that’s when I know, at least for tonight- I will be tortured for a while

Both our body’s slick, damp from overwhelming lovemaking

Passionate, intense, never-ending and thigh shaking

Our love is so pure, the stars are jealous

But as for me, oh god, I’m zealous

I nibble softly, sweetly at your ear

Hoping I may find a corner of your soul here

Let’s leave our bodies on the floor

Our souls make love, our hearts soar

From the tip of my toes, to the top of my head

I feel your love, deeper than any word ever said

For an eternity this goes on, I swear it will never end

Until finally our bodies collapse, and our souls ascend

Author's Note

would love some thoughts on the way this is written