Bitters

This sounds very interesting cant wait to start and read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

These are very sensitive writings in that all of them make a little bell ring inside another mind, which we tend to forget opens up a door into a distant Universe. Details upon details that I envy in your writing style make me wish I didn't lose that spirit of presence by getting so into the action and choreography of my story lines. Wow, you really make the people come alive, even the dead ones. I particularly like the first four, but not so much the last one, as it seemed to detract from the spirit that flows through the first four. Still, that's just my preference, as in personal character. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Your details make a flow to your piece of writing!!
Great Job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago