All of that.

Oh, love me.
Love.
Me.
Love me in completeness.
Hold me
With the care
You'd show your
Own
Soul.
Slip
Into
All of my well-being.
Right into me
And stay.
Oh,
Stay with me.
Always with me.
Always.
Always.
And I will
Give you
All of me.
No pretenses.

Just.
Me.

Reviews

[Alessander]

the repetition builds an immediacy and intensity - and this poem is refreshingly straight forward - still, I would want a simile/metaphor or two thrown in to satisfy my convoluted appetites lol

[Analgesia]

It has always interested me how much both poetry and prose can match with the rythems and tonalities of music. How when you arrange the stanzas a certain way it creates a certain beat when read aloud. As if just the way your eyes meet the page changes the sound which manifests itself in the subliminal portion of your mind as you read. This poem seems like an exercise in that process, and one which is very successful. There are certainly very strong emotions being expressed here as well, and that has never hurt a poem before. I hope I was of some assistance and thank you for writing something worth reading.

[Jeff Loquist]

Simple in its idea and yet so complex in its delivery...the way it is written causes you to read almost sporadically...like the idea