Darkness

When i saw the darkness,

As I saw the likeness,

I loooked into nothingness,

I felt the rottedness,

It creeped up on me,

There was nothing I could see,

My heart can never mend,

This is the end.

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[xDalliance]

The place you've lead us through this poem is dark. I think this line:

My heart can never mend,
This is the end.

completed the poem. I said it before and I'll say it again, you are very talented! Amazing one here sweety! :)