Stranded in Time

2 out of 8 poems in Final Ray of Light Folder

My day begins with me staring at your pictures.

Memories of you rushed in followed by emotional seizures,

I wished our relationship didn't end just like that

Meeting you, loving you, and then what?

Here I go sitting in a char

Wondering why life is so unfair,

As sharp blade gently runs through my wrist

Excruciating pain kicked in followed by my final wish.

Here I go sitting and stranded in time

Don't worry pain will pass and look! I'm just fine!

I gently close my eyes and started to reminisce

Memories of you and me before it was finished.

This time everybody will move-on while I'm frozen in time

Everyone will smile, laugh, and talk while I lose my shine,

Everything will end tonight

Tonight where I don't need to resist and fight.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When we don't resist and a deadly ending is needed. We need to find better place and dreams.
"This time everybody will move-on while I'm frozen in time
Everyone will smile, laugh, and talk while I lose my shine,
Everything will end tonight
Tonight where I don't need to resist and fight."
Life is good days and bad days. We must resist and fight for we don't know what we will do with our life. Each life had a reason and a purpose. Thank you Joshie for sharing the powerful poetry. You made me think tonight..
Coyote

[Mr.Etc]

A great art of words put up there.
I really liked this one.