Haiku exercises

just practicepeices from every day life

              The bee -black - leaving

              The blossom falls - a white parting

              And the space - well once

             

              As the chair scrapes

              Cream billows entice to heel

              The trotting lapdog

 

              Sunshine wedding bright

              The jackdaw is preening

              The open question

 

              The yew tree is cut

              The spider is wandering

              Over his new realm

 

              Cross legged with his dog

              Outside the shop waiting for

              Enlightenment - mum

Author's Note

simply writing to get some craftsmanship back

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they are separate but create a story....i especially like the first and fourth...

creative and well-syllabled....

j.