night haiku

this has taken me days to get write

                               The harvest moon

                               In bright debate

                               The clouds retreat

                               As a leaf wins

                               

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Somehow this reminds me of the
political debates... it seems that
people like nature are often
unpredictable. truly, Pat

[Michael Oliver]

An interesting thought - of course we write on the wavews of our time - even though subsonsciously thank you for adding a new dimension

[Patricia Wedel]

I can see the connection of an Autumn leaf being the
winner in all its color and laughter. truly, Pat

[Michael Oliver]

it was a sillhouett obscuring the some of the moon

[Patricia Wedel]

I love the idea of a silhouette obscuring .. the moon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just before they fall and die...they win...those beautiful autumn leaves shimmering under a halcyon sky.
j.