four line haiku

                          A grey morning

                          A black rook rests

                          Staring into  

                          It’s private thought

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like we often stare into ourselves....and when we are with people..somewhere off in thought...i really like this...in last line did you mean "its"?
that is how i read it...
such a good write that lets our minds rest on an interpretation.
j.

[Michael Oliver]

No I intended It's instead of its - each line has four syllables(my own discipline) It's is 'it is' which gives a feeling of 'aware' or mystery. I like each line to be a quasi noun state so a four line piece like this is four statements or artifacts which when taken in concatenation create a numinous sense.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay, gotcha....