two thoughts - after looking

Two unrlated thoughts while sitting looking out of my window at about 9:45 this morning

                 Last night - departing moon

                 Now these bright walls

                 Slate dark the rooves

                 This autumn winter thing

 

                 Final leaves are frantic

                 While underfoot they melt

                 They must watch each other

                 Wondering on being

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as two friends part...wondering on their worth...thinking about how much they meant to each other.
our autumn carries us away on a breeze...
winter is just an empty snow covered field...barren.
j.

[Michael Oliver]

Yss Jacob there is a very whistful subterxt to these lines- again that resonance between the internal and external landscapes.

[Patricia Wedel]

The leaves watching each other like
Colorful people will flutter along with the wind as birds continue their song... “when Autumn leaves 🍁 become a quilt of memories... “. Lovely thoughts as light retires early. Truly, Pat

[Michael Oliver]

Seems as though the Autumn is turning into winter and the as you says the light recedes more and more. thank you Pat