love

this is just about certain effects that can happen to a guy of who withholds a broken heart. enjoy :-)

Love, what a complicated thing.

It is made out to be a thing of pure beauty,

 However I think it is a cruel sign of fate.

 The cruel mistress known as love has the power to make you feel invincible,

 yet vulnerable at the same time.

It can lift you up, just to throw you back down.

It can catch you when you fall or

it can let you drop into a pit of despair and lonlieness.

Where it'll tear you apart.

 

However, isnt it funny how,

such a thing that is so complicated can be found anywhere.

And it can be found in anyone.

No matter how much of a monster they may be. one day they will find love.

But wait, maybe that will be their punishment for being such a vile person.

Maybe they will hold love for another who doesnt share it back.

 

You see love is a wonderful thing if,

it is shared equally with the right person.

Now when you find that person, never let them go.

Hold onto them with every last breath

Other wise you will join all the other lost souls in the pit of despair and lonlieness.

Author's Note

i hope that you can really understand the point that i am trying to get at in this poem. enjoy :)

Reviews

[Love Is Dead]

This was very true.But you made it very unique.

"hold onto them with every last breath
otherwise you will join all the other lost
souls in the pit of despair and lonliness."



That was my favorite line.
I hope evryone will understand how beautiful and how unique this very great piece was. I truly loved it.Awesome work.

love is very versatile.
you got the point across well.