No-one likes waking up at 4am...

Waking up at 4am 

Hope to never sleep again

For it brings to much pain

I guess this proves i'm not sane

Wish to end this life for there is nothing to gain

This life is to mundane 

There's no storm to the rain

I wanna take a different root, jump on another train

I wanna live in the fast lain

This life brings to much strain

This is just a repeat game

...between ball and chain

With nothing to regain

Don't ask me to,cause I just can't explain

Don't look at me with such disdain

No-one likes waking up at 4am...  

Reviews

[KAnderson]

Strong feelings here, almost perfect with those "tenses" but I won't say anything more about that. It's the content I enjoy and I hope it isn't a reflection of your true state of mind but if so I can relate to this too, we all can at one time or another feel this way. Life is what you make of it and depression can happen to the best of us. ie, Robin Williams comes to mind. Keep pouring ink to paper, the rhyme and flow of this is very good.

[micky]

Thank you so much but it's not a state of mind well not mine in any way :)

[Rene Salinas]

The wrestling of the mind at times invogorating at times intoxicating. Right here in this words it came at me as haunting. I personally do enjoy reading about it, the object myself not so much, so waking up at four and persecuted by pain, feelings of giving up, frustration of banality,the vacuity of rain, the constant repetition of emptyness, well, not really a joy ride - but if only to harness the power behind the unsettling moment and put it to work so to speak. Maybe....

Haunting times Micky

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you so much Rena glad you enjoyed my piece;)