To and fro ...

To and fro ...

A Poem by micky

I don't know...
Sometimes that is all there is to say
Maybe if I knew where to go
I would feel okay
Maybe if I got high I wouldn't feel so low
But I guess I just lost my way
Happiness feels forever ago
Life seems so grey
Why must time pass so slow?
Just laying here listening to the Fray
They say you reap what you sew
But it seems life is the hunter and I the prey
Guess it's just the game of to and fro...

© 2014 micky


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oh Micky, while this one is sad and you can feel the resignation and the frustration, it is written beautifully.. you have done a really good job with this one... the flow, rhymes, and emotion is done well.. only one thing I see..

I think you mean "sow" instead of "sew"...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

10 Years Ago

Yes I did April :) thank you for the review and I will fix that error soon :}



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OMG. This is superb. How do you even get to write such beautiful poems all the time and each piece is ever so outstanding and unique in its own way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much I really do appreciate it:)
I hope things are improving for you my friend. I know this feeling very well and it is no fun. You articulated your feelings beautifully, though they are sad and portraying a not so pretty feeling.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ashira
oh Micky, while this one is sad and you can feel the resignation and the frustration, it is written beautifully.. you have done a really good job with this one... the flow, rhymes, and emotion is done well.. only one thing I see..

I think you mean "sow" instead of "sew"...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

10 Years Ago

Yes I did April :) thank you for the review and I will fix that error soon :}

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