To and fro ...

I don't know...

Sometimes that is all there is to say

Maybe if I knew where to go

I would feel okay

Maybe if I got high I wouldn't feel so low

But I guess I just lost my way

Happiness feels forever ago

Life seems so grey

Why must time pass so slow?

Just laying here listening to the Fray

They say you reap what you sew

But it seems life is the hunter and I the prey

Guess it's just the game of to and fro...

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

oh Micky, while this one is sad and you can feel the resignation and the frustration, it is written beautifully.. you have done a really good job with this one... the flow, rhymes, and emotion is done well.. only one thing I see..

I think you mean "sow" instead of "sew"...

[micky]

Yes I did April :) thank you for the review and I will fix that error soon :}

[Tara Togoland]

OMG. This is superb. How do you even get to write such beautiful poems all the time and each piece is ever so outstanding and unique in its own way.

[micky]

Thank you so much I really do appreciate it:)

[Ashira Macy]

I hope things are improving for you my friend. I know this feeling very well and it is no fun. You articulated your feelings beautifully, though they are sad and portraying a not so pretty feeling.

[micky]

Thank you so much Ashira