My Que? [Mark callab] And April on the awesome artwork

I didn't realize you were waiting for a Que     

I didn't even know this is where it all falls apart

You could of told me...  

 

Now I'm so lost I'm not really sure what to do

Took a step back realizing I don't know where to start

It's like my world came falling down on the count of three

 

 

Remembering to when we first met

we should have tried to fix what was torn

We could have tried to hold what was inside

 

 

Was there truly nothing left?

the shock of waking alone to mourn

when and why did we start to hide?

 

 

Now an empty pillow laying

Coldness where before my hands felt love

Where once there were smiles from days past

 

These memories playing.. teasing.. pain

Photographs.. of happiness now push to shove

Questions if things in life.... ever.. truly.. last

 

So thank you for all the memories and scars

 Thanks for the life lessons and regrets

 Thanks for all you took and gave

 

 Now I can reach for the stars

 I've forgiven but won’t forget

 designing a new road to pave

 

 I suppose there is nothing else to do

  But push to go on

 Get past my pain

 

 A life I must start anew

 I guess this is my Que to be strong

 As long as I learn and never let history repeat again

Author's Note

It was such a grate honor working with Mark!) I would also like to thank April for the amazing picture she work hard on for Mark and I, Thanks you guys. It was really awesome working with April and Mark;}

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Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

I will have to take a detour here mainly because of the strange way that this is presented. Que in spanish meaning what right? Hence searching for the question? That question that when posed will lead to the answer and if that is so.... But then if this is the angle then why the spanish? Well on a wing and a prayer you seem to have lost yourself or so the writing would seem to indicate and arrived at a moment of realazation. As silence brings about a new day a new oportunity the undeniable reality that a new question to continue is neede but which one? In theory things never repeat so I guess you mean you wouldn't want to make the same mistake twice. Yeah well good luck with that. I have learnt not to even say that or put it into writing as it leads ot the next "cage" and then the next and then the next, by now you get the idea but let's stop and consider this. What about no more questions? No more demands? What would happen then I wonder.

Micky I'm assuming this is the direction but without letting people know is difficult also is collaboration so I guess I have to acknowledge Mark as well and April for her creative input indeed.

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you Rene for the interesting review:)

[Rene Salinas]

Was that que, what in spanish?

[Rene Salinas]

Or cue....

[micky]

It's Cue I already corrected the mistake :)

[Rene Salinas]

Micky it is in the title and then repeated twice through the writing plus the word collaboration. But from all the typos in the world that changed the meaning of the writing completely which makes me wonder is the other half of this writing awake to this?

[Mark]

Sorry Rene.. this collab has been difficult for Micky as i have been inconsistent on the site with personal closer to home troubles... the word is cue.. Micky has been very patient with me and understands my lack of available time... added together with our time zone differences, back and forth communication has been limited.

I love your reviews and am sorry for the confusion, ive told Micky I will have more time tonight to spend on the poetry

Thank you for your genuine intrest and advice

[Coyote Poetry]

Outstanding job. Two talented poets create a good journey with good words and thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Amazing work!!!!
this was great self realization poem.........
we must learn from my mistakes.........so that when history takes a full circle......we can change it!
loved it!!!
:)

[micky]

Thank you so much I really enjoyed working with Mark and April:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome............. :) :)

[Mark]

The pleasure was all mine Micky, I love the way you write, your rhyme and flow is something I wish to do as well as you (you were very patient with me;) and of course a big thank you to April for the Art work :)

I love how it all came together :)

[micky]

It was so fun writing with you Mark I really loved every minute and even though April didn't want her name in the title she really deserved it she did an amazing job as did you Mark, You and April really inspire me :) THANK YOU GUYS SOOOOOO MUCH!!!