They were wrong

in school they taught us that if you take two halves and put them together they make a whole
She was a broken girl and he was a lost  soul
So they try to apply what they were taught
but it was never a good enough reason and youd ought,
to think that something so young should sprout
but he never let his feeling out
and the voises in her head would tend to shout in a space so big that her emotions would often echo
so she floated around never learning how to let go
So when the teacher said a half plus a half would make a whole
that looked to one another hoping it would be easier,hoping that life wouldnt keep take its tole

So he opened up
little do they know that this love will corrupt
she would share every, pain staking heartbreaking breathtaking memorie
no matter how much it pained her to reminese
he let her in his dark mind into a never ending blabk bliss
and they relived, revised they worst fears, reliving the paing reliving the lies
hoping that there spark would catch fire
hoping to end this eternal darkness,hoping for a tommorow thats brighter

but this is life we are talking about,so lets be realistic,lets be honest
its the same thing that pulls you down,come on speak your mind dont be modest
we both know how this is going to end
there draining eachother, they wont have the luctury of saying "you can still be my friend"
Having knowone else she conbsums herself of trying to fix him
trying to forget the pain within
he has to be strong for her but since he is the only person that has ever been strong forhimself,
it dosent make sense but since all he has is his strength,thats what he has to give
i wanna know now how the hell is he going to live

slowly they give all they have left to one another
little do they know they are killing eachother

TWO broken halves wont make a whole...

Reviews

[alf]

Hi micky. You have a real talent for facing issues head-on and putting those issues out there to confront the world. You see these things, you feel these things and then you make any one who reads your writing KNOW the issue.Two halves will never make a whole in a broken world. I love what you are doing, please keep on keeping on, alf

[micky]

Thank you so much Alf for the kind words....i try to say it like it is....i really am greatful for your opinion and honesty...thanks to writers like you i feel i can keep going thank you so much kind friend!!!!:)

[alf]

I'll be back to read more, I promise, just a little overwhelmed with other stuff at the moment, alf

[micky]

:) good luck Alf :) thank you again:;)

[jeannemarie coulter]

very powerful imagery leading to deep questions about life and love and healing...

[micky]

Thank you....:)

[613]

You are a very gifted writer. I look forward to reading more from you!

XO, Brittney

[micky]

Thank you Brittney...i look forward to hear from u again :)

[613]

You're welcome! Keep it up!

[Kousika]

Great ya.. Really this reveals the reality that "TWO broken halves wont make a whole"..
Good flow of feel in your writing..
I just loved your way.. Go ahead..:)))

[micky]

Thank you so much

[Olumegbon]

this is very deep, i really love it. been awhile I've read something that I can easily relate to... you're a talented writer. thanks for sharing. will definitely make this my favourite

[micky]

Wow thanks so much, I really appreciate your review friend :}

[AaronFreitas]

This is a very good poem my friend... you said it right with "TWO broken halves wont make a whole." Good work!

[micky]

Thanks Aaron :)

[Zoomout]

I love this one :) its so true

[micky]

Thank you so much:)