If the shoe fits?..

If the shoe fits?..

A Poem by micky

You never think its going to be you
until that day...
That day your foot fits the shoe
Until the moment your concentration begins to sway

When your'e problems weigh you down   
When your'e shoulders cant bare anymore 
When your head is to heavy from your crown
When you lose you morals,waking up on a strangers floor

You lost now...
Never to be found
You would question "How?"
But your mouth is to dry to make a sound

Withdrawal...
Shakes...
 The bugs begin to crawl...
Your mind racing,your heart aches

Disappointment...Shame...
questions...Pain...
Self hatred...a sick little game...
Left with nothing...ONCE again...

© 2015 micky


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"You never think its going to be you
until that day...
That day your foot fits the shoe
Until the moment your concentration begins to sway"

No more truer words than that Micky. I have been there and can totally relate. A very nice write my friend.... my pleasure to review :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Thank you Aaron...
AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :P



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"You never think its going to be you
until that day...
That day your foot fits the shoe
Until the moment your concentration begins to sway"

No more truer words than that Micky. I have been there and can totally relate. A very nice write my friend.... my pleasure to review :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Thank you Aaron...
AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :P
Oh wow...sounds all to familiar. Loved it...thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Thank you honey :p
OMG! I loved it... Great work. While reading I feel Your words deeply. That's what good writers do to make the readers FEEL your words

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dreamer...your too kind:)

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