ceiling

Falling down

                 down

                     my downfall.....

from cloud 9 to the ground

                        these emotions leaving me an outlaw

"Shhhhhh!!!" don't make a sound

                          Maybe it will get easier...i hope

these invisible chains on my ankles,wrists

                          Tighter goes the rope

                                                       round my neck....cringe my fists

"shhhh" it will be over soon

                           I lost feeling...

                                           I think of June

Slowly drifting...to the ceiling

                                        Just let go...

Don't try to take a breath

                                        Don't struggle..."shhh I know"

                                I always knew the answer was Death

                                       R.I.P Logan

Author's Note

trying new format

For a once upon a time friend

Reviews

[alf]

Hi micky. What depth of emotion you have layered into your words!!! This is brilliant!!! Loved the format, you have it exactly right for this poem!!!! I think the poignancy comes through the words because you cared so deeply and I can't separate one line from the others without detracting from the whole!!! Top of the list of your writes, dear friend!!! You have great talent, please keep writing!! alf

[micky]

wow thank you sooo much for the amazing review

[Pushkar Prabhat]

sorry to hear about your friend........stay strong!!!!
he must be special......you have written much about him.........lucky to have experienced such connection.
this is deep and dark.......powerful and beautiful.......
great new style......
i loved it!!!
:)

[micky]

Thank you Pushkar for the kind words....he was special to me

[AaronFreitas]

Damn this one is deep my friend... has dark tones to it. I really enjoyed it... sorry to hear about the friend... haven't seen ya in a while I think I was starting to miss you! lol

[micky]

Aawwww...:) yeah it was a good friend....thank you for the kind words Aaron i kinda missed you to:p

[AaronFreitas]

Awww I think you made me blush haha... I got so used to seeing you pop on all my writings... don't be a stranger ;)

[micky]

yeah...i will defiantly get back to poping up lol

[AaronFreitas]

Sweet :) I look forward to it

[micky]

I wrote this for myfriend Logan he was a soft person....to many problems....much love to him

[Thesecuts]

Wow, this is absolutely amazing. Short, but so long and lasting. I wish i could read it over and over.

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words i really appreciate yuor review

[Thesecuts]

Anytime you are so talented and gifted.