Who am I ?

As time goes by...
I ponder...
Who am I ?
There are so many questions I wonder


But to this one I have answer,
And it haunts me
Am I a chancer?
As I drown in each memory


Filled with regret
Anger,hate,
No self respect
To much on my plate


Im drowning in a puddle
Life...I don't want it
The continuous struggle
Depression,my habit

I fell so fast noone could catch me
Lost in this ocean
This never ending sea
Filled with so much emotion...


I don't know who I am
I do know I'm lost...

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

Each line of your precious soul's release seems filled with waves of dark aching. This is the place many wander into and never find escape from. In this new year I wish for you to find the depths of you, filled with life, filled with joy, filled with the beauty of you that shines into the world endlessly. xo

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words my friend

[Echoes of Eros]

It is a deep honor to be your friend. xo

[micky]

Like wise...it's good to start the year with you again

[Lonely Shadow]

Well written and sounds very reflecting. I love it!

[costa siwale]

incredible sense of reflection in this one.
i can relate to each and every of your words.
well written my friend

[micky]

Thank you for the review and kind words.I really appreciate it

[costa siwale]

you are welcome.

[costa siwale]

incredible sense of reflection in this one.
i can relate to each and every of your words.
well written my friend

[RELavender]

This is a great poem! Who of us hasn't wondered about who we are, and you address it in a new angle. I love the rhyme scheme and the rhythm as well. The last two lines are a perfect way to end to the poem. Really good job with this!

[micky]

Thank you for such an amazing review...I really appreciate ur kind words