Alliteration

For finding fortuitous fortress foundations
One only obsesses over, obtains, or opens occult origins
But boozy blatant babbling brings backwards borrowing
So, slow such sour startles, soft sounds surpass
About all abyss, alas, an albino alderman
Person placed, padlocked, per partial pageant participation
Lost loser, listlessly loving lopsided

Uptight, upsidedown, underneath, usurped, untitled
Coaster, castaway, collapsed, calcium caked

Entertain earned enrichment
Enshrine each eclipsed ensemble
End empowered emblems
End epidemic endangered Earth

-A

Reviews

[Relic]

I think you've gone overboard here. (In my opinion) You've saturated each line to the point where the poem makes no sense, at least to me. It's also clunky to read.