lost and found

Guidance

hansel said to gretel
let us drop these bred crums so that together we may find our way home
because losing our way would be the most cruel of things
this year i lost my way
and losing your way on a journey is unfortunate
but losing your reason for the journey is a fate more cruel
when the destanation was reached it wasn't me who arived, it wasn't me at all
and once i lost myself i had two choices
find the person i use to be
or lose that person completely
sometimes you have to step outside the person you been
to remember the person you were ment to be
the person you wanted to be
the person you are

Reviews

[Devi DM]

It's what everyone goes through. Someone every minute. The way you express reality and what others feel. You write it very beautifully.

[C.Chang]

Its always better to be yourself than being someone. We often try to camouflage with the society but thats the biggest betrayal of ourself. Be yourself. You are Unique.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"sometimes you have to step outside the person you been
to remember the person you were ment to be
the person you wanted to be
the person you are "
I like the words. "Reset your life to where you want to be." Sometime we lose ourselves to work and other things. Need to find the proper path. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote