Yet I Don't Know Why...

Yet I Don't Know Why...

A Poem by *Evelen*

My heart it aches

with every step I take.

I don’t know why,

but I feel as if I’m about break.

Confusion and delusion,

fogging up my mind.

A blank stare from my eyes,

a frown from nowhere.

All I know is;


My heart it aches

with every breath I take.

I don’t know why,

but I feel as if I’m about to die.

This pain and heartache,

Building up in my chest.

Tears weld up in my eyes,

A muffled scream from nowhere.

Yet all I know is;


My heart it aches,

And I don’t know why.

I try to fake

with every step and breath I take.

But the confusion and delusion

fogs up my mind,

and the pain and heartache

explodes in my chest,

with a muffled scream from nowhere.

The frown shows up,

and the tears come down.

As my mask comes falling down.

© 2011 *Evelen*

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. Please ignore grammar problems:)

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This I'd wonderful. This is my 15 year old self reflecting. Exactly how I felt & still feel at times.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I love it. It is just flowing with emotion. well written, altogether awesome. I do hope you don't really feel this way....

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love how you start every stanza. hope everything is ok :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

perfect way to put this in. i couldn't have done it better. very descriptive and is still confusing at the same time till the end. keep it up :3

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on June 11, 2011
Last Updated on June 11, 2011



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