Vampiress Feelings

a vampire love poem

Love

 

you gave me that feeling

that one thing we all want

to wake up and kno

theres someone thinking fo you

 

when i wake up

when i fall asleep

your on my mind

 

when you hold my hand

     my breath stops 

when we kiss 

    my heart skips a beat 

when we hug 

    i feel like I fit right into you like were ment to be 

when you call 

    i dread the moment you have to go 

 

since you and me became 

    Love to Be 

theres no where I would rather be 

    Than with you  

Reviews

[Legion]

Cool. Great expression. I like the concept behind this. If you like vampyre stuff, check out a few I have written. I have two short storys and a song/poem. The two storys are "A Passion for Perfection" (a bit erotic) and "A Walk in the Sun". The song/poem is "The Curse From Madame Rouge". Hope you enjoy them. Catch you later.

[Runa]

I knew you were going to put something up here about vampires! I love your poems so much Kali. Anyways the emotion in this really brings out what love feels like. Brillantly written!

[Lady Of Darkness]

I Love vampire poems they are fun to write and to read.
Nice flow. Great work.