Set Me Free

It's quiet dark no life around
I'm searching looking for you but your no where to be found
I can't get through making no sense
Loosing control I have no defense
My hearts wide open I've laid it down
You act as thou you don't see I'm left unfound
The love in my heart is turning to hate
I thought we had more a passionate fate
Guess I was the only one that felt that way
Thought you did too so many things you didn't say
Why didn't you tell me you didn't want what I want
I made it clear there was no front
I told you I love you and I'm here to stay
I'll never hurt you I'll never walk away 
You said you had feelings you never felt before
And when I looked in your eyes time was never more
You say I touched you deep in your soul
Even saying I made you feel whole
The first years were so strong we had such a connection
And now so cold completely no affection
I know the emotions are true
We had this bond no one could break through
I'm ready to give up and walk away
I know you are too you don't want to stay
If you don't want us to be
I'm begging break my chains "Set Me Free"

Reviews

[qaralynn]

love it!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

my goodness this is a beautiful poem. i think you brought out your heart on a sleeve in this poem, showing how it got battered by the one you use to love. very good poem

[Magdelena]

Nice!!!!! Love the imagery in this!

Mags xx