primal

primal

A Poem by Millzy86
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written 2015

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wrapped up in you
a primal need for your touch
take me to pieces
with your bridled lust

two bodies entwined
carnal hunger unleashed
lost in our sin
All self control is breached

though time has passed
the desire still burns
I don't want to deny the fire
this foolish girl never learns






© 2015 Millzy86


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This expresses the urgency of the soul even after much time has elapsed.I suggest be indifferent,and not foolish.Lovely writeup.

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Millzy86
Millzy86

New Zealand



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I am just a normal person but I use poetry to express the things I can't say. Still very much an amateur but I just wrote what comes. I'm open to criticism as it helps refine the hand. more..

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