Fire inside

Fire, it burns in our eyes

Fire, it burns us inside

Is it really a toy, luring you into a trap?

Or will it guide you turning into a map

It eats us alive, inside, out

It makes me sad when others pout

etching a mark into my skin

Forming more and more sins

It builds a solitary shield around me

Can't you see this monstrosity?

Scared and alone in this dark and painful path

The fire making a clear way in the abyss

It vanquishes the night's children, turning them into mist.

The advantages that makes us free

No matter how hard I try it's still inside me 

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love your poem, it's so creative, nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)

[For Who I Am]

Thank you! I was just thinking about fire and wrote a poem on it.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Aguilar]

I sometimes wonder the same thing. Great poem

[Hope]

No matter how hard I try it's still inside ! Wow ! Good job friend :)

[Forgotten14]

I like this representation of fire, because it's the subconscious belief of fire itself; the idea of fire. What I got out of it was that there are always positive and negative outcomes of fire, and it can leave permanent marks on a person.
Just lovely.

[For Who I Am]

Please review! If there's any mistakes please let me know! More mistakes allows me to fix them. Please! Thank you!