The Worst Part

just read it...i was thinking about the worst part of shopping(ik im random) so i was like well there is none lol..then one of my friends pointed out that the bill was pretty bad..so this is a poem about it.

I need a little push now and then

To put some some force behind this pen

Just as you would need

Encouraging words to succeed

Lazy sitting like a large hen

Wishing i wouldnt have done it again

I listen to the girl plead

for me to finish this awful deed

Ill count to ten

then begin again

Though indeed

it makes my heart bleed

                 To pay my bill

                             ~Naomi(the girl with an obession for NOT giving things away)

Reviews

[LivingDeath]

I like this poem alot. When i read it i was thinking about needing a push or some encouragement to just get through tough times. So thats why i like this poem, it can mean something different to every reader and the writer as well. Very good write :)