Speak Up

Could you speak up?

I cannot hear the words you are trying to say

I am here to listen, tell your problems

Lean on my shoulder

 

Let me take the pain away

Tell me who has wronged you

I have your back my friend

Talk to me

 

There is no enemy too big

Nothing that I can’t fix

If only you’d tell me

Why you feel so bad

 

Do not worry about them

I will fight the evil

Speak up, do not be afraid

To tell me that you love me

Author's Note

I'm not sure that I like this one, doesn't really feel like my best writing...

Reviews

[Stefanie Holmes]

You may feel that it's not your best... but it has a beautiful message woven in it that many people probably would like to hear. Sometimes I feel like a piece I write is not my best so I usually sit it aside and casually work on it here and there. Sometimes my creativity sparks and something wonderful comes out... making that so-so poem turn into something spectacular.
This poem though is perfect as is... but that is strictly my opinion. The message came across and it wasn't cryptic like some poems can be. You spend hours reading them and just have no idea exactly what the writer wanted us to see. Anyway, don't be down on yourself with this one. I liked it!

~Stefanie

[Mind Racer]

Thank you! I just didn't feel like I put my "all" into it. Your comment makes me feel like it wasn't that bad. Thanks!

[Stephen]

It`s best indeed ... Uumm .. and yeah .. I enjoyed reading this write. Hope you`d like to see one more version of this write so, here we go :-)

Could you speak up?
I cannot hear the words you are trying to say
I am here to listen, Hey speak up
To me your problems, you wanna say

Let me take the pain away
Tell me who has wronged you
I have your back my friend my way
Talk to me, i`m looking over you

There is no enemy too big
Nothing that I can’t fix
If only you tell me your problems
I`d try to emerge my words with yours ~~~ intermix

Do not worry about them
I will fight the evil
Speak up to me you love me
I`m not a soul of devil

Keep writing! I simply enjoyed reading your work!

[Ren Grace]

This poem reminds me of a friend of mine who cares so deeply for me. He always offers his shoulder and persists I share my troubles with him, but I'm shy and very protective of myself. This piece helped me see through someone else's eyes and witness emotion on a different perpective. Thank you for sharing!

[Mind Racer]

Thank you! I hope you let him see more of your feeling now!

[s y e]

A lovely Valentines Day poem with a lovely message. This is good. A very moving write for sure, don't think so negatively about it. :)

[Mind Racer]

Thank you, all these comments are making me feel better about this writing!

[rottinghexgrl]

I think the message in this poem is a very important one. So many people are afraid to rely on someone because of the lack of trust in our society. this may not be your best writing, but it is very powerful and moving. I loved reading it :)

[Mind Racer]

Thanks! That makes me feel so much better about it!

[don't know]

"Let me take the pain away
Tell me who has wronged you
I have your back my friend
Talk to me" thats what its all about nice write

[Mind Racer]

thank you so much!

[Linda alexander]

Could you speak up?
I cannot hear the words you are trying to say
I am here to listen, tell your problems
Lean on my shoulder

Great write, very genuine style, poet has strong shoulder as poem says, enjoyed

[Mind Racer]

Thank you!

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care

[Sami Khalil]

"There is no enemy too big

Nothing that I can’t fix

If only you’d tell me

Why you feel so bad"

Speak up or forever hold your peace. A splendid read and write...:)..............

[Mind Racer]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................