Edgar

This is an assignment I had at school for Halloween. I had three choices, and I chose to write from the perspective of a kidnapped victim. Tell me what you think!!!

                              Every year around this time I get a dark feeling inside of me. I always feel like my kidnapper is going to come

looking for me again; strange because he is in prison now.  I know it’s just a matter of time before him, and I speak once more. But this

 time it will not be the same; this time I will kill him with my touch.  A part of me just wants to feel his touch again. I feel like I am in

 love with my kidnapper. I’ve never had the guts to tell anyone about this because everyone would probably think I am some lunatic,

 but I honestly believe that I am in love. In love with my kidnapper. Every night since we have been apart I have dreamed about him.

 I never wanted to be pulled apart from Edgar, but somehow my family found me. It was Halloween night when I first met Edgar.

 He snatched me up as I was walking home from a party; the way he grabbed me I just really enjoyed the violence.

 Ever since Edgar, and I spent years together I have not been able to love anyone else.

I feel like he is the one for me, and I must be with him again.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Miranda]

It isn't like that now. Was a mistake

[lily pennvellyn]

it is weird, but so is Johnny Depp and he's a millionaire. I think it is a very interesting poem though. it makes you wonder what is going through the girl's mind. the only thing is that the spacing is quite unusual and I think that it needs to be fixed because I am convinced that I finished a stanza when I come to a space and it throws off my reading.