Still soulless zeal

Still soulless zeal

A Poem by Mircea Popescu

Still soulless zeal


I have known shackles that fade

The relentlessness within

Tis’ but lonely desolation

And the zeal that’s only sin.

 

Yet it’s still a torch ablaze

Sparking just above your braid

It’s a grieve that’s keeping me

Exlied from song you played.

© 2014 Mircea Popescu


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Mircea Popescu
Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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last two lines are fantastic.....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mircea Popescu

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
Impressive. With emotion that left me worn inside. I'm quite glad I read this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mircea Popescu

6 Years Ago

Thank you.I appreciate the kind words.
Enjoyed the write and good message you shared within your poem...well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mircea Popescu

6 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping a line. And thank you for reading.
A. Amos

6 Years Ago

You're most welcome...will keep visiting your page.
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Pax
I really like the formatting of this piece. It made me believed that in every hardship, sparks of joy/happiness/contentment is never far away from where you are. That there will always be a muse somewhere out there... very expressive!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mircea Popescu

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing me. I appreciate the fact that there are some people who the actual message .. read more
Pax

6 Years Ago

you are very welcome :) I enjoyed the poem's positive message

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Added on June 23, 2014
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Tags: still, soul, soulless, zeal, desolation, exile, song, torch, sin, lonely, shackles

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Mircea Popescu
Mircea Popescu

Sibiu, Romania



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Aspiring writer. Atheist jerk deemed arrogant by the second rate minds of society. I write poetry, fantasy pieces, critical essays and I've recently tried my hand at play writing. I play the guitar an.. more..

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