Animosity

just my thoughts on paper.

When does it stop?
Where does it end?
A continuous stream of
consciousness-a broken record
in my head.
How do I make the
pain fade,
when it is in my heart.
Carve it out with a
spoon, and rip this
life form apart.

I want this empitness to be filled
so I'll never want for a days
worth of love-never again
feeling this ill.
Tell me what to do
how to make it right.
Show me how to break
it down, and put it in my veins.
Out of mind, out of sight.

Or so I wish to believe.

Author's Note

*Recently editied. May have further editing in the future.

Reviews

[Lizzie Mitchell]

this is incredibly deep and emotional
love it

[mishka]

thank you. I write from actual experiences in my life.

[Rebecca Leigh]

Overthinking- yes i also do this far too often, and reflect on all the flaws of every situation.... very clear and concise, well done.